Yesterday I wrote "Chances," for the Indies Unlimited flash fiction contest.
Here is the photo prompt:
And here is the story:
Our chance encounter seemed
so contrived that even Danielle Steele would have written it off.
She saw me, standing there,
dripping and pathetic, and offered to share her umbrella.
"Where are you going?"
she asked.
"The Café du
Commerce. It's my favorite restaurant."
"That's my favorite as
well! Are you meeting... Are you dining alone?"
"I am. It's my usual
Tuesday ritual. Though I had to push it back a day, owing to a
business appointment. You?"
"Alone."
"May I join you?"
Our dinner lasted until
they began putting the chairs on the tables.
As we strolled toward our
parting point, I chanced it. "May I... call you some time?"
"I believe in in
destiny. If Fate wishes for us to be together, She will see that it
happens. Perhaps at the market. In the park. Or waiting for the bus
again. If you find me—when you find me—place a
passionfruit where I may see it. Then I will know it was Her hand."
Two days hence, I stood
outside an apartment on the Rue du Prony, waiting. Twenty minutes
later, she appeared at the window. A small smile broadened into a ray
of sunlight when she spied the gift.
She took it, nodded toward
the entrance of her building, and closed the shutters. I smiled, and
turned away just as the explosion shattered the afternoon air and, I
assumed, the girl.
I pulled the notebook from
my pocket, and crossed another name off my list.
Not too dark, eh? Let me know what you think.
Oh, and you still have until 8:00 p.m. EST on April 1 to enter.
You're sick. And I mean that in a good way! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you. I have to say, I am rather proud of it. (And, just in case you're free on Wednesday, that's when the voting takes place...)
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