I'm still chasing that elusive FIFTH victory in Flash! Friday. This week, we were given a photo of Victoria Falls...
... and asked to incorporate the theme of "man vs. nature," which I might or might not have done. You can be the judge.
This is "Victoria's Fall."
The flood of tears threatened to carry
her away. What began months ago as an occasional trickle had grown
into a raging torrent that nearly drowned her every night.
It is said that the individual droplets
of water which comprise a river will, in time, return to their
source. Victoria knew that someday she, too, would. Until that day –
the day she could walk through the front door and tell her parents
they were right when they said big-city life was not in her blood –
she relied on memories of home to keep her afloat.
These tactile comforts sustained Victoria, and helped counteract the bile which rose in her throat each time another john laid a twenty on the nightstand.
And this is "Over The Edge."
She wavered, her resolve
bobbing like a lost cork tossed into a stormy sea.
She toyed with the edge,
dancing on the precipice, then pulling back before gravity could win
the battle.
She knew that if she took
the plunge, everything would change.
Those who surrounded her
seemed content to follow the course that stretched out before them.
But she could not find comfort in conformity. She never could see
clear to just letting herself go with the flow. Her odyssey had been
one marked by turbulence, a series of stops and starts, rapids and
shallows, eddies and vorticies.
Then a memory came
flooding back. That of winter's chill, of being frozen time, fearful
of never again knowing what running feels like. That was enough.
I should do it. I will
do it, she thought even though a drop of water is not capable of
what, through the lens of humanity, could be called actual thought.
She let go of the safety of the rock and rode over the falls.
Downstream, somewhere, her
new life awaited. She had no idea where it may lie. But she would
find it. Until she did, she knew one thing. She was free, freer than
she ever had been.
Please share your thoughts on either your thoughts on "No Escape."
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