By Michael Seese
Friends, as we speak, The Secret World Of Gustave Eiffel is sitting in the queue of my local printer. His initial estimate was one week. So by this time next week, I might be able to report that it's boxed and on its way to Paris for the American Library In Paris Book Award contest.
Let's recap:
1/8: I learned of the contest.
1/12: I wrote the first words.
3/12: I finished the first draft (with acknowledged gaping holes) at 57,323.
5/10: I finished the final draft, sent it to the proofreader, and began designing the cover.
5/17: REALLY complete at 79,600 words.
By the way, here is the cover.
I don't think I want to try doing this -- writing and publishing a novel in 5 months -- EVER again.
Wish me luck!
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By Michael Seese
It's crunch time, my friends. I am nearing the finish line on "The Secret World Of Gustave Eiffel." As I write this, I am through 183 of 264 pages with regard to revisions. And I have spoken with the printer. He is on board.
So...
What I need are proofreaders. Someone to go over it and look for the usual (typos, continuity flaws, etc.) but also to offer a high-level opinion, specifically, "It sucks. Don't waste your money" or "It has a chance."
So if you are interested in helping out, please drop me a line by at
mail AT MichaelSeese DOT com
You also could post a comment with your email, though if you do, please format it as I have done above: name AT MyServiceProvider DOT com, to avoid the SPAM bots.
I can't pay. But I will thank you in the book's acknowledgements.
Let the games begin.
By Michael Seese
Well, I'm in the revisit / revise phase of "Eiffel." As I said in my previous previous entry on the topic, I have finished the first pass-through, and now am filling in the blanks. The substantial blanks. Sometimes it's a drudge. Sometimes I fear having to tackle the task. And sometimes...
Last night I prepared to work on chapter 3, which takes place during Eiffel's school years. Some time ago, I had roughed out a wide-ranging conversation between Eiffel and one of his professors. I shelved it back then, because I realized that the topics they discuss should have a bearing on what comes in the rest of the book. So I opted to press on, vowing to later plug in references to the key events that I would devise as I moved forward. Prior to last night, as I contemplated what additional ideas to incorporate -- even though I now know comes in the later chapters -- I was drawing lots of blanks. But I had some time on my hands last night, so I persevered.
And the words just came.
When I first sat down to type, I had hoped to merely flesh out a few of the details already there, and perhaps refresh my memory of that skeleton conversation, so that I could see if any later events "fit."
But the words just came.
When the dust settled, I got down over 1,000 words. And I'm pretty happy with them. In fact, I would call that chapter done.
Such is the magic of writing.
Total count: 59,239.
By Michael Seese
Considering the weekend Castle marathon (with the subsequent reviews posted here), it's amazing I managed to get any writing done on "Eiffel." But I did, surpassing 40,000 yesterday.
2/13/13 32,461
2/14/13 34,570
2/15/13 35,296
2/16/13 36,140
2/17/13 37,288
2/18/13 39,456
2/19/13 40,539
2/20/13 40,784
Monday (2/18), as you can see, was an outstanding day, despite the fact that:
1. I forgot my glasses. You should have seen me in the dimly lit coffeeshop, writing at arm's length, and
2. When I fired up my laptop in the aforementioned coffeeshop, my PC spit out an error message about not being able to start Windows, and then spent the longest 10 minutes of my life "repairing." But it seems to be fine now.
Yes, Monday was just one of those days when the words flowed. All told, I wrote 2,168. But to underscore just how in tune I was, I had completed just short of 1,000 by 11:00, and thought I would take a break. But then I thought, "Ooh! One more thing." Fifteen minutes later, I had another 415 words.
I feel I'm entering a little bit of rough patch right now. Plot-wise, the Tower is under way, and I haven't as yet decided how to keep driving the action. (I recognize the previous statement probably makes minimal sense to you; but I know what I'm talking about.) But I will press on, and hope that I find the words.
More often than not, I do. And tonight is a treadmill night; walking is usually good for 500 or so.
Onward, onward...
By Michael Seese
When I last wrote about The Secret World Of Gustave Eiffel, I was on the verge of 20,000 words. I said in that post that I hoped to "ramp it up" this past week. Well...
2/3/13 19,573
2/4/13 21,012
2/5/13 22,789
2/6/13 24,815
2/7/13 26,193
2/8/13 27,405
2/9/13 28,114
2/10/13 28,507
2/11/13 30,177
2/12/13 30,884
I'm especially proud of the days on which I "skipped a 4th digit," if you will. For example, on February 4, I went from 19K to 21K.
February 6 also was a good day. I had prepared to shut down for the night. But when I saw that my word count was 24,768 -- or 1,979 for the day -- I just had to press on to reach 2,000. (2,026 to be exact.)
My ultimate goal is 80,000 words. But my plan is to get from where I am now to the end, and total perhaps 60,000. Then, I can go back and fill in the blanks, especially at the beginning, which is very sparse. So while I still can't claim (even to myself) that I'm "there," I am "getting there."
I'd like to offer another snippet.
Let me state, probably again, that I like writing
dialogue. I really enjoy writing it. On the days I'm writing a lot
of dialogue, I have humongous word counts. It just flows. Whether it's
any good... I suppose that is for you, the readers (and ultimately the
New York Times reviewer) to decide.
Here is the set up. An important plot element centers around the decision to choose Eiffel's design as the centerpiece of the 1889 World's Fair. The chapters which lead up to this section explain that it was a rigged contest; Eiffel was going to be selected. Per Wikipedia, it was contrived in reality, too. But Eiffel was a bridge builder. Therefore, the architectural community launched a subtle (and not-so-subtle) campaign against him.
Simply pondering the scope and scale of the work which lay ahead caused his head to hurt. Eiffel rubbed his temples in an effort to silence the throbbing. When it grew in intensity and frequency, he realized that the pounding came from without, rather than within. Someone was at the door.
As soon as he opened it, he wished he had not.
“Gustave! How good to see you,” Jules Bourdais said through his sneer. Bourdais always addressed people by their first names as a form of condescension.
“Monsieur Bourdais, to what do I owe this unexpected pleasure?”
“Gustave, does one need a reason to visit an old friend?”
Bourdais emphasized the word “old.” Eiffel certainly did not consider him to be a friend. He nonetheless maintained his cordiality.
“Of course not, Monsieur Bourdais. Please do come in. Allow me a moment to straighten up."
Eiffel hurried back to his table, and hid the drafts of the Tower beneath another sheet of paper which featured several half-finished doodles, and served expressly as a decoy. When Eiffel looked up, he saw that Bourdais had shown himself in.
“What are you working on, Gustave?” he asked, coming around to Eiffel’s side.
“Nothing out of the ordinary. As you can see, just a bridge. Bridges are what I do best, after all.”
“Would this be the bridge for Breslau?” Bourdais asked, raising an eyebrow.
Eiffel tried to hide his astonishment.
“Breslau? What do you mean?”
“Nothing. So you are not preparing an entry for the Exposition?”
“Why do you ask?” Eiffel couched the question in faux-sincere innocence. In reality, he desperately wished to know the real purpose behind Bourdais’s visit.
“Even though you are an engineer, Gustave, perhaps you have had conversations with some of my colleagues in the Société Française des Architectes. Securing the commission for the the gateway of the Exposition would be a great honor for any of us. For you, I would imagine, the crowning achievement of a lifetime. So I just assumed that you would be preparing a proposal. Even though you build bridges.”
Eiffel noted that Bourdais overemphasized the last word, even more so the second time than the first.
“Oh, I am,” Eiffel said, casually. He knew that Bourdais was baiting him. But he could not resist playing the game a little.
“Oh?” said Bourdais as he scanned the table.
“Oui. As of now, I have just a few rough sketches. Nothing even remotely worth mentioning. The competition is not to be formally announced until 1 October, is it not?” Eiffel, it goes without saying, knew by heart the correct date.
“No, Gustave, it is 3 October.”
“But of course.”
“So you have not committed much to paper?”
“No. You?”
“I am nearly complete,” he boasted.
Eiffel knew Bourdais, or at least his reputation for vanity, very well. He knew that the proper mixture of prodding and ego-stroking would loosen his tongue.
“I am certain that yours will prove a magnificent fabrication. I must confess, Monsieur Bourdais, that whenever I stroll down the Pont d' Iéna, and pass the Palais du Trocadéro, I am compelled to linger for several minutes so that I may drink it in, and admire its bold Byzantine flavor."
Eiffel knew full well that “byzantine” could also be interpreted as “devious” or “surreptitious.”
“You, then, are in concordance with most of Paris. And whenever I travel by train and cross one of your bridges, I think, ‘This bridge was built by Monsieur Eiffel. I can rest secure in the knowledge that, most likely, it will not collapse.’ ”
“You are too kind, Monsieur Bourdais. So your proposal for the Exposition...will it be modern, or adhere to the classical schools of thought?”
If I have not said so lately, I learned of Jules Bourdais through my "encyclopedia," also known as Eiffel's Tower, by Jill Jonnes. For that matter, many of the characters which I am building worlds around are those real-world personalities who populated Paris at the time, and who come to life on her pages.
I am so going to have to send her a copy when it's done. (Positive thinking.)
By Michael Seese
Five figures...
Blog followers? That would be nice.
Advance on royalties? That would be REALLY nice.
No, I'm pleased to say that after just a little over a week of writing, my new novel-in-progress has reached the 10,000-word mark. Here is the official day-by-day tally.
1/12 627
1/13 849
1/14 2,126
1/15 3,805
1/16 5,433
1/17 6,457
1/18 7,117
1/19 7,374
1/20 7,671
1/21 8,339
1/22 9,201
1/23 10,252
Though I have said in the past that I tend to concern myself too much with word count, in this case, I'm a deadline. So it does matter.
I now feel as though I can share the title. It's "The Secret Life Of Gustave Eiffel." Below is another snippet.
He had just settled back into one of the plush leather chairs with a cigar and a snifter of Brandy de Jerez when he heard a minor commotion near the door. Rising from his comfortable position, he saw that the excitement stemmed from the arrival of the American humorist Mark Twain. Though Eiffel had never read any of Twain’s three (or was it four?) novels, he had heard that the Missourian was an excellent conversationalist, one possessed of a sharp mind and a sharper tongue. Reasoning that it would behoove him to secure Twain as an ally—lest his world-renowned vitriol join the already maddening chorus of critics—he followed Twain to the bar and said, “Marcel, I would like the pleasure of buying Monsieur Twain’s drink, if he will accept it, that is.”
Turning to face Eiffel, an impish smile erupted from beneath Twain’s famously bushy mustache. “Actually, I stopped in to inquire about purchasing this entire establishment. So, as long as you’re buying...” Seeing a flash of fear trace across Eiffel’s face, Twain quickly added, “Forgive me, Monsieur. I am told that my sense of humor is an acquired taste. Merci. I gratefully accept your kind offer, Monsieur...”
“Eiffel. Gustave Eiffel.”
“Ah, the man behind the Statue Of Liberty. Or should I say ‘underneath?’ It is a great honor to make your acquaintance, sir.”
A second drink arrived, and Eiffel motioned toward his chair near the fireplace.
The men sat down. Twain took a deep breath of the oakey scent, and said, “Magnificent! Now all that I require is a fine—”
Eiffel produced from a pocket his leather cigar case, and offered one.
“Monsieur Eiffel, I must say I have found that everything we Americans hear about the French—your grace, your civility, and your timing—is absolutely true. Thank you,” he said, likewise accepting a light from the match held in Eiffel’s outstretched hand. After a few puffs, he said, “At times like these, good sir, I am convinced that the almighty created man, alcohol, tobacco, and woman...in that order.”
Eiffel chuckled at the bon mot. Clearly, Twain’s reputation did not exceed him.
“I would suggest the addition of ‘humor’ in the fourth position, Monsieur Twain.”
“Touché! Very well played, sir.”
They took simultaneous sips of the fragrant alcohol.
“So, what brings you to Paris, Monsieur Twain?”
I feel that I've made some good progress, though this past weekend, I found my faith a bit shaken. I had come up with the basics -- though they needed fleshing out -- leading up to the "defining moment" in the book. But I only had 7,000 words leading up and including the "defining moment," and very little idea of what would come next.
And then from my library came a book I had ordered: Eiffel's Tower by Jill Jonnes. I'm basically scanning it, but the book has proven to be a veritable encyclopedia that details the events surrounding the building of the Tower which, as you might have guessed, is the aforementioned "defining moment." In short, it is chock full of the personalities, other than Gustave Eiffel, who were swirling around Paris at the time. (Ergo, the Mark Twain passage.) It's given me new life.
I so will have to acknowledge Ms. Jonnes in the foreword, and send her a copy when the book is published.
Let us see what the coming week brings...
